Post by Rose on Sept 2, 2011 8:06:33 GMT -8
Title: He was never mine!
Rating: G
Character: Parvati Patil
Word count: 546
Warnings : I am a huge disaster in writing fanfics!
Summary: Parvati has been asked by Harry to go with him to Hogsmeade.What is the huge surprise waiting for her? Can she handle it?
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Parvati Patil had always liked Harry from the time she first saw him.
Is this what you call ‘love at first sight’? She cleared the thought from her mind. Nope, the person you love should love you too. He didn’t, he never did. I meant nothing to him. If….if only….he….Before she could finish her sentence she fell on her knee, buried her face in her hands and started crying.
Flashback-
Parvati had been talking to Lavender about Divination homework when she saw Harry coming towards her. Her heart started beating hard and her cheeks started turning a bright shade of pink.
‘Hi, can I talk to you for a second’ said Harry looking really happy about something.
‘Su-sure’ said Parvati as she followed him to wherever he was taking her. She looked back and saw Lavender winking at her.
He then stopped suddenly and Parvati was just going to bump into him but she stopped herself just in time.
‘Do you mind coming with me to Hogsmeade this weekend. There’s something I want you to help me with. It’s a surprise, okay?’ said Harry
Parvati couldn’t believe what she heard. Had Harry literally asked her out!
Hogsmeade
Parvati was being rushed by Harry to a small shop, she couldn’t make out what the shop was for but as they went nearer she finally saw a jewellery shop. Was he going to buy her something? Necklace, earrings, bracelet anything? Her mind was full of questions.
They both rushed inside and Harry asked the shopkeeper for a ring.
A ring! Om my gosh a ring. Is he---She was cut off midway by Harry.
‘Hey Pravati! Which one is the best ring out here? I just can’t decide. They all are really beautiful.’
‘Um---I--I like that one’ said Parvati. She loved it! It was just perfect.
‘Okay then…’said Harry. He then gave the money and bought the ring.
Parvati was trembling with excitement. When will he give her the ring? When will he confess to her?
Soon she found herself in the great hall….she looked around but couldn’t see Harry so she just went and sat down with Lavender who wanted to know everything that happened. As there was nothing to do but wait for him she told her everything.
Finally she saw him coming towards her. Again she went through the same feelings like in the morning. He had the ring in his hand and was smiling broadly at her, so she smiled back. But this time he didn’t come to her, he drifted past her and went to the red haired girl sitting just 2/3 places after her. She just kept on staring at both of them and could feel the tears welling up in her eyes.
‘I love you so much!’ said Harry putting on the ring on that girl’s finger. The ring she loved, the ring she thought would someday be hers. And the boy---the boy she thought she would in the near-future be hers to keep forever till she took her last breath.
‘Are you okay?’ said Lavender. Her voice felt distant. I know she cared and wanted to know if I was fine. But I was not. Then everything went blurry and I found myself in my bed like this.
Edit: Awarded 10 Points by Lilac, on 4/9/11.
Rating: G
Character: Parvati Patil
Word count: 546
Warnings : I am a huge disaster in writing fanfics!
Summary: Parvati has been asked by Harry to go with him to Hogsmeade.What is the huge surprise waiting for her? Can she handle it?
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Parvati Patil had always liked Harry from the time she first saw him.
Is this what you call ‘love at first sight’? She cleared the thought from her mind. Nope, the person you love should love you too. He didn’t, he never did. I meant nothing to him. If….if only….he….Before she could finish her sentence she fell on her knee, buried her face in her hands and started crying.
Flashback-
Parvati had been talking to Lavender about Divination homework when she saw Harry coming towards her. Her heart started beating hard and her cheeks started turning a bright shade of pink.
‘Hi, can I talk to you for a second’ said Harry looking really happy about something.
‘Su-sure’ said Parvati as she followed him to wherever he was taking her. She looked back and saw Lavender winking at her.
He then stopped suddenly and Parvati was just going to bump into him but she stopped herself just in time.
‘Do you mind coming with me to Hogsmeade this weekend. There’s something I want you to help me with. It’s a surprise, okay?’ said Harry
Parvati couldn’t believe what she heard. Had Harry literally asked her out!
Hogsmeade
Parvati was being rushed by Harry to a small shop, she couldn’t make out what the shop was for but as they went nearer she finally saw a jewellery shop. Was he going to buy her something? Necklace, earrings, bracelet anything? Her mind was full of questions.
They both rushed inside and Harry asked the shopkeeper for a ring.
A ring! Om my gosh a ring. Is he---She was cut off midway by Harry.
‘Hey Pravati! Which one is the best ring out here? I just can’t decide. They all are really beautiful.’
‘Um---I--I like that one’ said Parvati. She loved it! It was just perfect.
‘Okay then…’said Harry. He then gave the money and bought the ring.
Parvati was trembling with excitement. When will he give her the ring? When will he confess to her?
Soon she found herself in the great hall….she looked around but couldn’t see Harry so she just went and sat down with Lavender who wanted to know everything that happened. As there was nothing to do but wait for him she told her everything.
Finally she saw him coming towards her. Again she went through the same feelings like in the morning. He had the ring in his hand and was smiling broadly at her, so she smiled back. But this time he didn’t come to her, he drifted past her and went to the red haired girl sitting just 2/3 places after her. She just kept on staring at both of them and could feel the tears welling up in her eyes.
‘I love you so much!’ said Harry putting on the ring on that girl’s finger. The ring she loved, the ring she thought would someday be hers. And the boy---the boy she thought she would in the near-future be hers to keep forever till she took her last breath.
‘Are you okay?’ said Lavender. Her voice felt distant. I know she cared and wanted to know if I was fine. But I was not. Then everything went blurry and I found myself in my bed like this.
Edit: Awarded 10 Points by Lilac, on 4/9/11.