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Post by Zoe on Nov 8, 2011 22:54:53 GMT -8
Great Job Ink! I like how we are not given much detail but it is still powerful, that's the brilliance of drabbles!
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Post by Rachael on Nov 8, 2011 22:56:23 GMT -8
At least that's what I meant by it and what I'm almost positive Woody19 meant by it. She'll have to confirm that herself though, since I cannot totally speak for her. You can totally speak for me!
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Lilac
Seventh Year
Operation Poufsoufle
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Post by Lilac on Nov 8, 2011 23:28:10 GMT -8
Great drabble! I loved the metaphor for quidditch and his death; it was really fitting. What I mean is that it didn't feel forced, because too many of these types of fics feel like someone's trying to make a link. This was really well done. It was also better than most drabbles because instead of spending time talking about useless things you got straight to the point and got so many literary techniques and emotions into that short fic. Great job!
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