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Post by kohane on Nov 2, 2011 17:11:19 GMT -8
Title: Proud Rating: G Warnings: None Word Count: 242 Summary: He knew, they were proud of him.
The rain was pelting against his body as he flew about the pitch. The dark storm clouds above rumbled with thunder, and only seemed to grow darker with every moment he spent searching for that elusive golden Snitch. It was almost impossible to see, even with a repelling charm on his glasses, to keep the water off, the sheer darkness brought on by those ominous dark clouds, made sight almost impossible.
Light was being generated from the top of each spectator tower, to give the players somewhat decent lighting, but from his vantage point above all that it didn't help much. Sure if the snitch was down below it would reflect the magic light, thus allowing him to see it and make a daring dive to capture, however he'd searched all over down below, and the snitch was nowhere. So he was up here, searching the black clouds, for a small ball of gold.
He saw it! Right as a flash of lightning lit up the sky, he saw the snitch, not a foot from his face. He flew after it, and after a few dips dives and turns, reached out and grabbed the snitch. The moment his fist closed about the small ball, the rain stopped and the clouds began to thin. He looked up in shock, quickly turning to awe. A Rainbow, perfect in brightness and shape, was directly above. He knew what it meant.
They were proud of him.
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Post by Rachael on Nov 2, 2011 17:18:50 GMT -8
Ohhhh! I love this! Well done!
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Post by kohane on Nov 2, 2011 17:26:05 GMT -8
Oh yeah. Just wait for the next one. The next one is my fave so far.
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Post by Elienp on Nov 2, 2011 22:31:52 GMT -8
That's cute
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Post by kohane on Nov 3, 2011 16:07:01 GMT -8
Thanks ^^
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Post by Bec on Nov 3, 2011 17:55:29 GMT -8
I love it! so cute!
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Post by kohane on Nov 4, 2011 7:34:33 GMT -8
Yay! ^_^
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Post by Kaitee on Nov 4, 2011 23:28:57 GMT -8
Do you see that rainbow in the sky? It is because I am proud. Just thought I use your own writing to compliment you. This is brilliant!
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Post by kohane on Nov 5, 2011 13:10:49 GMT -8
lol thank you
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Post by jazzyjess on Nov 7, 2011 0:00:18 GMT -8
Aww! *dies* How perfectly sweet! I've always loved the notion that raindrops are the tears of angels and that rainbows are the smiles of ones we love, so this fic is perfect!
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Post by kohane on Nov 7, 2011 7:18:49 GMT -8
Yeah, there's just something about seeing a rainbow after a big dangerous storm that makes me smile. I know allot of people think it's a promise from "god" or whatever, but I don't know...I know what makes up a rainbow and all that, the refraction of light through the raindrops at a distance gives the appearance of a still rainbow merely miles away, when in fact it is moving with the rain.
Then there's the whole Pot of Gold at the end of a rainbow thing as well. There are so many stories and such about rainbows that, coupled with our own natural amazement of such a phenomenon makes Rainbows one of the most magical things we can see in this day and time. ^_^
However I have gone off and rambled, sorry about that. I'm glad you like this drabble ^_^
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