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Post by Elienp on Nov 2, 2011 12:40:34 GMT -8
Title: The most important? How to land! Warning: None Rating: T Words: 240 Summary: In spite of the threats, of the broom, she still doesn't want to play.
Her hands were tightly clasped – and would remain thus no matter what Ginny would do – around the broomstick.
“Let go of it! You'll have cramps!” “Never!” Hermione sharply answered.
She had been pestered, threatened, forced, to sum up, to go on that thing. There was no reason for her to be in a good mood.
“If you want to play you have to let go of it!” “That's where you're wrong!” Hermione angrily shouted. “I don't want to play!” “But everyone wants to play Quidditch!” “That's where you're wrong again!” from angry Hermione's voice was becoming dangerously high-pitched. “I am not everyone! I am Hermione Granger, I hate Quidditch! And I hate you right now!”
Ginny came flying next to her friend. “I know, I know. Now will you please let go that broomstick? If we don't train we won't win against the boys!”
Hermione glared at her. “Are you deaf? I've just said-”
“I swear, if you say one more word I make you fall.”
Hermione opened you mouth, to immediately close it when she saw Ginny's serious face. Merlin, she was in a pickle!
“Good,” Ginny nodded, appreciating the silence. “Now, the first thing you need to know is-” “How to land!” Hermione quickly exclaimed.
The red-haired girl sighed. She should have known better than to believe in such a surprising docility.
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Post by Rachael on Nov 2, 2011 12:45:02 GMT -8
Lol This is excellent! I love this! I could imagine this scene happening in Canon.
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Post by jazzyjess on Nov 2, 2011 12:50:07 GMT -8
LOL! Me too, woody! Such a clever fic, Elie! Hee hee. There's nothing quite as fun to explore as Hermione's fear of flying.
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Post by Elienp on Nov 2, 2011 13:02:51 GMT -8
Thank you very much *is blushing*
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gear
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Post by gear on Nov 2, 2011 13:29:09 GMT -8
I love your interaction between Hermione and Ginny. I wish that there was more of it in cannon.
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Post by Bellzabean on Nov 2, 2011 14:47:25 GMT -8
I can totally see this happening, great job!
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Post by lilidotcom on Nov 2, 2011 15:13:15 GMT -8
It's true, this could be taken straight our of the HP books =) Really really good!
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Post by kohane on Nov 2, 2011 15:41:11 GMT -8
This is really good. Not typically my scene since I'm a massive Yaoi fanatic, but this is still up there in my standards ^_^
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Post by Elienp on Nov 2, 2011 22:28:56 GMT -8
Thank you very much ! =]
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Post by Kaitee on Nov 5, 2011 0:18:56 GMT -8
I loved it! Amazing job!
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Post by Elienp on Nov 5, 2011 2:33:36 GMT -8
Thanks =]
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Post by Lilac on Nov 8, 2011 23:30:46 GMT -8
Haha, that's great! I was always sad that Rowling just skipped over Hermione's fear of flying.
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Post by Elienp on Nov 9, 2011 3:29:47 GMT -8
Thanks =) I just felt like using her fear, I'm not making fun of her though, because I also hate heights xD
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