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Post by jazzyjess on Nov 8, 2011 21:57:16 GMT -8
Title: Close-Mouthed Rating: PG Word Count: 222 Warnings: Summary: Hermione reflects on her affair.
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You watch out the window as Hugo and Rose swoop and dive on their broomsticks. You’d be happier if they’d use the Weasleys’ old Cleansweeps – they don't go so fast – but Harry’s gift to your children each year is always the newest model of racing broom. Godric’s Hollow isn’t the same place it was when you visited with Harry all those years ago, but at least the wizarding community doesn’t put restrictions on letting the kids have fun.
“Worrying again, are you?” Ron slides his arms around you from behind and you breathe in his familiar scent. It’s tarnished in your nose, now, clean sweat and spice and leather tangled with guilt and self-loathing. You’re afraid you’ll confess to him, you’ll confess everything, if he doesn’t say anything, and so you bite down hard on your tongue and don’t answer.
“Y’think Hugo will make the Quidditch team this year?” he says after a moment. “He’s got better at hanging onto the ball now.”
You realise that’s what your children are doing outside – Rose is darting around Hugo, passing him the ball around obstacles like trees and your little gardening shed that rise up in the way, and for a change, Hugo doesn’t fumble the Quaffle.
And you realise that you’ve messed up. You’ve messed up big time.
You keep your mouth closed.
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Bec
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Post by Bec on Nov 8, 2011 22:00:35 GMT -8
Oh wow, Hermione you minx! I love how Ron's scent has also changed to Hermione...it's sad though Great fic though!
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Post by Elienp on Nov 8, 2011 22:22:50 GMT -8
I do admit your drabble confused me a bit at the beginning, it's very well written though
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Post by jazzyjess on Nov 8, 2011 22:58:27 GMT -8
Thanks, you both! And Elie, I really love writing in second-person point of view, so I hope that was the only reason it was confusing! And I hope it makes more sense now
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Post by Rachael on Nov 8, 2011 23:23:36 GMT -8
gah! Adulterer! ...well written fic, though.....
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Post by Elienp on Nov 9, 2011 3:24:37 GMT -8
Do not worry, it was just at the beginning, beside I really like your writing
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Post by jazzyjess on Nov 9, 2011 13:13:36 GMT -8
Thanks, woody ;D I realise I said "they doesn't" instead of "they don't" (wtf was I thinking??) so that's corrected now.
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