Rose
Fourth Year
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Post by Rose on Oct 22, 2011 7:52:42 GMT -8
Title: Be With You Forever Rating: G Word count: 158 Warnings: little bit of jealousy Summary: Pansy wants Draco back. -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Dear Draco,
I wish everything would have turned out differently. I thought you were coming back, I thought once the war is over I will have you back. But you never came.
Still, I never let go of you. Hoping to see you again, hoping to be reunited with you, hoping to marry you and hoping to be with you forever and ever. I had so many hopes,all of them let down but one fulfilled. The one in which I wanted to see you.
I saw you yesterday in the Daily Prophet looking happy and content with the girl who was standing beside you. The girl whom you are engaged and in love with. The girl whom I am destined to hate my entire life. But then I realized that your happiness is my joy. So best wishes to both of you.
PS. Draco, if she ever leaves you. Then you know I will always be there. FOREVER!
Edit: 10 Points Awarded by Jess, 12/14/11.
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Post by Elienp on Oct 22, 2011 9:01:58 GMT -8
Even though I don't like Pansy you almost make me feel sad for her, well done!
Edit: 5 Points Awarded by Jess, 12/14/11.
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gear
Sixth Year
"What fun is it being cool if you can't wear a sombrero?" ~Calvin and Hobbes
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Post by gear on Oct 22, 2011 10:23:19 GMT -8
Wonderful fic!
Edit: 5 Points Awarded by Jess, 12/14/11.
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Post by maraudersrule97 on Oct 22, 2011 13:37:06 GMT -8
Great writing! I never really liked Pansy, but this showed a whole different side to her.
Edit: 5 Points Awarded by Jess, 12/14/11.
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Post by phoenix on Oct 22, 2011 14:05:40 GMT -8
Even with characters we don't like, you can't help but feel sorry for her. This is really good!
Edit: 5 Points Awarded by Jess, 12/14/11.
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Post by Fate on Oct 28, 2011 0:10:28 GMT -8
You're making me want to explore Draco and Pansy's relationship! Good job!
Edit: 5 Points Awarded by Jess, 12/14/11.
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Crystal
Sixth Year
♥ Proud Gryffindor ♥
Posts: 617
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Post by Crystal on Oct 29, 2011 16:58:03 GMT -8
Very sweet. Edit: 5 Points Awarded by Jess, 12/14/11.
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Post by jazzyjess on Oct 31, 2011 22:57:32 GMT -8
I love Pansy! Great job at showing this side of her.
Edit: 5 Points Awarded by Jess, 12/14/11. **review points cut-off
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