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Post by jazzyjess on Oct 21, 2011 18:44:27 GMT -8
Title: Dear Tuney (1) Rating: G Word Count: 177 Warnings: Summary: Lily writes to her sister three times on her first day at Hogwarts.
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Dear Tuney,
We just said goodbye and I know you are really angry with me but I’m so excited that I have to write this letter right now!! This train is huge! There must be a thousand compartments. I almost sat in one with some other girls but Sev says I ought to stay away from them, they’re the kind of girls who pick on Muggle-born kids like me. I still giggle even when I write the word Muggle!
And Tuny, there’s a lady who comes around with a trolley and there’s so much candy on there, I think my teeth would fall out if I ate it all! Sev bought me a chocolate frog and I got my very, very first wizarding card! Guess who it was? It was Professor Dumbledore! Sev says everyone who sits in this compartment gets Professor Dumbledore as their very first card!
I have to go now, but as soon as there’s something new, I’ll write about it and tell you! Sev says I can use his owl!
Love you!!
Lily
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gear
Sixth Year
"What fun is it being cool if you can't wear a sombrero?" ~Calvin and Hobbes
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Post by gear on Oct 22, 2011 10:57:25 GMT -8
So cute. I love how perfectly you captured the awe of a kid in a new place.
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Post by Rachael on Oct 22, 2011 11:03:14 GMT -8
Aww,, this is so cute! Jess you're awesome!
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Post by maraudersrule97 on Oct 22, 2011 12:20:41 GMT -8
This is so adorable! It sounds just like a little Lily. Great writing!
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Post by phoenix on Oct 22, 2011 13:28:46 GMT -8
Very nicely written and a good representation of Lily!
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Post by Elienp on Oct 23, 2011 3:15:57 GMT -8
It's very cute how she wants her sister to share her new happiness!
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Post by jazzyjess on Oct 23, 2011 21:02:28 GMT -8
Thank you, everyone! ;D
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Crystal
Sixth Year
♥ Proud Gryffindor ♥
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Post by Crystal on Oct 27, 2011 15:49:04 GMT -8
Very cute! I love how her first impression is very similar to Harry's first time on the train, but expressed in her own voice. Excellent job!!
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Post by jazzyjess on Oct 31, 2011 22:26:14 GMT -8
I was hoping to show how similar I think they'd have seen things, and with the same sense of wonder! ;D Thanks!
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Post by Fate on Nov 1, 2011 1:58:45 GMT -8
So so so so so cute! ^ You definitely succeeded with that Jess!
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