gear
Sixth Year
"What fun is it being cool if you can't wear a sombrero?" ~Calvin and Hobbes
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Post by gear on Oct 14, 2011 19:31:23 GMT -8
Title: Marauder's Map II Rating: PG Word Count: 139 Warnings (if any): Don't think so? Summary: The Making of the Maruader's Map
Mr. Moony,
I like the idea of the map, but I think that we’ll have to wait until we get back to school before we can actually do anything about it. We can’t contact Paddy too many times over the summer before his parents get suspicious and start confiscating his letters, and we both know that that would be … bad … to put it mildly. The mirrors are good for detention, but people (read: Parents) tend to notice to get a bit worried when their kids start talking to their reflections. Maybe we can brainstorm separately, then talk again in September?
Prongs
PS. Taking a leaf out of your book, I sent the same thing to Wormtail, but not to Padfoot – like I mentioned earlier, we can only pass so many of them off as mail about homework.
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Bec
Ministry Employee
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Post by Bec on Oct 14, 2011 19:54:22 GMT -8
once again I love how you add little details like the possibility of Padfoot getting into trouble if he receives too many letters. It makes it a whole lot more believable! great work.
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Post by Rachael on Oct 15, 2011 2:58:01 GMT -8
Excellent! Well done!
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gear
Sixth Year
"What fun is it being cool if you can't wear a sombrero?" ~Calvin and Hobbes
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Post by gear on Oct 16, 2011 6:58:15 GMT -8
Thank you both!
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Post by maraudersrule97 on Oct 26, 2011 15:44:45 GMT -8
I love this! Great job.
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Crystal
Sixth Year
♥ Proud Gryffindor ♥
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Post by Crystal on Oct 27, 2011 15:37:19 GMT -8
Very well done, especially with the little details, as Bec mentioned.
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Post by jazzyjess on Oct 31, 2011 22:40:29 GMT -8
Poor Sirius! I love how they care so much about him in such a roundabout way.
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