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Post by phoenix on Oct 22, 2011 5:43:40 GMT -8
Title: Nerves of Steel Rating: G Word Count: 115 Warnings (if any): None Summary: Ron writes about his first Quidditch Game the night before.
Dear Diary:
I am going to suck at my first real game of Quidditch tomorrow and the whole school will be watching. What an embarrassment I will be to the Weasley family, not that I already am not. I suck at being a keeper but I was the best choice out of all the other candidates. What am I going to do? My stomach hurts, my head hurts and everyone keeps wishing me good luck tomorrow, like that helps. How am I ever going to keep the quaffle out of the hoops? Oh tomorrow is going to suck. Unless some kind of miracle happens, Gryffindor will lose. It will be my fault.
A nervous Ron
Edit: Awarded 10 Points by Lilac on 7/2/12.
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Post by Elienp on Oct 22, 2011 8:11:58 GMT -8
Well done, it really sounds like Ron!
Edit: Awarded 5 Points by Lilac on 7/2/12.
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gear
Sixth Year
"What fun is it being cool if you can't wear a sombrero?" ~Calvin and Hobbes
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Post by gear on Oct 22, 2011 10:28:17 GMT -8
Ron's voice is perfect in this.
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Crystal
Sixth Year
♥ Proud Gryffindor ♥
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Post by Crystal on Oct 22, 2011 11:26:13 GMT -8
Nicely done, capturing Ron! Especially knowing that he really was sickly-green about that first quidditch match. Edit: Awarded 5 Points by Lilac on 7/2/12.
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Post by maraudersrule97 on Oct 22, 2011 12:19:16 GMT -8
This sounds just like Ron. Great job!!
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Post by Fate on Oct 27, 2011 23:47:04 GMT -8
Poor Ron! His voice comes out really strongly in this! I can just see his pale face and shaky hands as he writes this!
Edit: Awarded 5 Points by Lilac on 7/2/12.
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Post by jazzyjess on Oct 31, 2011 22:03:48 GMT -8
My feelings are going out to him, here! Poor guy. Heee hee. Edit: Awarded 5 Points by Lilac on 7/2/12.
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