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Post by maraudersrule97 on Oct 22, 2011 11:57:12 GMT -8
Title: I'm Mature Now (I) Rating: PG Word Count: 231 Warnings: I don't think there are any. Summary: James writes Lily a letter, telling her how he's matured.
Ms. Lilian Evans,
I was told to write you a letter by a very trustworthy friend of mine (Remus) and inform you that I will be most civil to you this year. I have matured greatly, as you can probably tell from my outstanding letter writing skills, and would appreciate it very much if you could give this new me a chance.
With that said, I just wanted to tell you that you're hair looks lovely today (I'm sitting behind you in class right now) and you don't look like you just rolled out of bed, like you just told me I did. It's the Potter hair; there's really nothing I can do to tame it. You'll understand when we have kids.
Remus is glaring at me, so I think my letter is long enough. I'm going to hand it to you as soon as I fold it up.
Love,
Mr. James Potter.
P.S. Please go on a date with me?
P.P.S. Remus said not to give this letter to you in class, but I'm going to do it anyway. (Girls like bad boys, right?)
P.P.P.S. I tried to hand it to you and you glared at me. That's the last time I write you a letter! You're not getting this beautifully written letter now. HA!
P.P.P.P.S. I'm going to give it to you as soon as class is over, okay?
Edit: 10 Points Awarded by Jess, 11/17/11.
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gear
Sixth Year
"What fun is it being cool if you can't wear a sombrero?" ~Calvin and Hobbes
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Post by gear on Oct 22, 2011 13:42:51 GMT -8
*Snicker*. This seems just like something a young James would write.
Edit: 5 Points Awarded by Jess, 11/17/11.
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Post by Elienp on Oct 23, 2011 3:17:00 GMT -8
Very well done!
Edit: 5 Points Awarded by Jess, 11/17/11.
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Post by Kaitee on Oct 23, 2011 13:31:46 GMT -8
James you goon! This is so cute and so well done!
Edit: 5 Points Awarded by Jess, 11/17/11.
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Post by maraudersrule97 on Oct 23, 2011 13:38:27 GMT -8
Thank you all!
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Post by Fate on Oct 28, 2011 14:29:21 GMT -8
The P.S's are epic ! XD I love the little mentions of Remus!
Edit: 5 Points Awarded by Jess, 11/17/11.
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Crystal
Sixth Year
♥ Proud Gryffindor ♥
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Post by Crystal on Oct 29, 2011 9:51:34 GMT -8
Perfectly spiteful and insistent. Very sweet!
Edit: 5 Points Awarded by Jess, 11/17/11.
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Post by jazzyjess on Oct 31, 2011 20:54:58 GMT -8
I lovelovelove this line...
Edit: 5 Points Awarded by Jess, 11/17/11. **review points cutoff
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