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Post by maraudersrule97 on Oct 21, 2011 8:39:58 GMT -8
Title: Secret Keeper Rating: PG Word Count: 103 Warnings: Betrayal by a little rat. Summary: Peter writes to Voldemort.
My Lord,
I have the best news to tell you! I've just been named Lily and James . . . er, James Potter's Secret Keeper. I can give tell you where their house is in this letter, so you can stop the Prophecy from happening, before it's too late! It would be most grievous if you died, My Lord.
If there any possibility that's it's the Longbottom's boy? If so, I know who their Secret Keeper is, and I can give you details on her.
You're most faithful servant,
Peter Pettigrew.
[glow=red,2,300]17 Morris Lane, Godric's Hollow.[/glow]
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Post by Rachael on Oct 21, 2011 8:52:05 GMT -8
That little rat! Pun most definitely intended! Grr! Well-written!
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gear
Sixth Year
"What fun is it being cool if you can't wear a sombrero?" ~Calvin and Hobbes
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Post by gear on Oct 21, 2011 14:21:32 GMT -8
Very plausible.
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Post by phoenix on Oct 22, 2011 5:34:33 GMT -8
Makes me dislike him ever more. Great job!!
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Crystal
Sixth Year
♥ Proud Gryffindor ♥
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Post by Crystal on Oct 29, 2011 10:05:54 GMT -8
ohh he is a horrible little rat. I love how very Peter this sounds, and the glowing address is a lovely touch.
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Post by Fate on Oct 31, 2011 1:49:51 GMT -8
Peter you are such a butthead! Good job! I love seeing fic with the lesser used characters!
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Post by jazzyjess on Oct 31, 2011 20:58:35 GMT -8
Ew Peter. Though you've caught him well, I hesitate to say good job solely because I hate Peter and his skewed sense of loyalty!
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