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Post by Zoe on Oct 20, 2011 23:11:40 GMT -8
Title: Firewhiskey and Family Rating: PG Word Count: 232 Warnings (if any): None that I can think of. Summary: Sirius writes James a letter. Written for Operation Poufsouffle!
Prongs,
I can’t take it anymore. I can’t stay in this house another day. I’m leaving.
Padfoot.
Padfoot,
You better be on your way to my house. I swear to Merlin if you don’t turn up here in the next few hours I’m going to go looking for you.
Prongs.
Moony,
Padfoot turned up here late last night. He’s left his parents for good, and he’s in pretty rough shape.
Prongs.
Prongs,
I’m on my way, and I’ll send word to Wormtail.
Moony.
Wormtail,
Head on over to Prongs’ house, Padfoot isn’t doing so well.
Moony.
Prongs,
Moony and me are on our way now. Does Padfoot need anything?
Wormtail.
Wormtail,
Some healing potions, and Firewiskey. Lots of Firewiskey.
Prongs.
Moony,
I forgot to tell Wormtail to bring some Peppermint Tea, Toilet Paper, Spell-O-Tape, and fireworks.
Prongs.
Prongs,
…Dare I ask what all that is for?
Moony
Moony,
Wormtail is already here, what is taking so long?
Prongs,
Prongs,
I ran into McGonagall while getting the supplies. She wasn’t pleased.
Moony.
Mother and Father,
By the time you receive this you will have noticed that I’ve left. I just wanted to tell you that I won’t be coming back. Ever. Family is more then who your related to, they’re the people that are there for you when nobody is. That’s what James, Remus, and Peter are, my family. You never were.
Sirius.
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Post by Rachael on Oct 20, 2011 23:21:57 GMT -8
Aww poor Sirius!!!! Excellent Job!!!! Well done!
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Lilac
Seventh Year
Operation Poufsoufle
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Post by Lilac on Oct 20, 2011 23:49:13 GMT -8
That was so amazing, and you managed to capture all of the emotion perfectly! I felt so sorry for Sirius, but then Remus getting caught my McGonagall made me laugh. Great fic!
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Post by Bellzabean on Oct 21, 2011 0:36:03 GMT -8
Great fic! I loved how it was both serious and light hearted at the same time.
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Post by Elienp on Oct 21, 2011 7:56:23 GMT -8
A very sweet fic which shows all the importance of friendship!
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Post by maraudersrule97 on Oct 21, 2011 8:49:38 GMT -8
This is so funny and so sweet. I love their friendship! And I wonder what Remus was going to do with all that stuff . . . hmm. Great writing!
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gear
Sixth Year
"What fun is it being cool if you can't wear a sombrero?" ~Calvin and Hobbes
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Post by gear on Oct 21, 2011 14:20:57 GMT -8
Very cute!
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Post by Fate on Oct 26, 2011 17:56:22 GMT -8
A-DORABLE. I love how they are ready to drop everything to help their friend, heart warming.
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Crystal
Sixth Year
♥ Proud Gryffindor ♥
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Post by Crystal on Oct 27, 2011 13:02:29 GMT -8
Very sweet! I love how you managed to capture each of their distinct voices in their notes!
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Post by jazzyjess on Oct 31, 2011 21:01:10 GMT -8
Oh Sirius D: On the other hand, the humour is a great offsetter! Bet Remus could talk his way out of that one, no problems!
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