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Post by maraudersrule97 on Oct 21, 2011 8:30:35 GMT -8
Title: Christmas Holidays (I) Rating: PG Word Count: 163 Warnings: Bullying is mentioned. Summary: Lily's alone with the Marauders for Christmas, and writes to tell her friend about it. For Gryffindor!
Dear Mary,
I can't believe you left me here alone over Christmas break. Do you know who's here? James Potter and his croonies, that's who! Ugh, I despise the lot of them (except for Remus, or course, he's different from them), they're all such bullies!
Sirius told me that I'm expected to spend every second of my time with them - ha! Yeah, right. That's defintely not going to happen. I can just sit in my dorm all day, and there's no way for them to get up here.
Oh, no, I hear someone knocking on the window. It's probably them! I don't want them to see this letter, they'll read it aloud and then they'll know how I don't like them.
Are you sure there's no way I can still join you for Christmas? I will love you forever if you let me!
Help me!
xoxo - Lily
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Post by Rachael on Oct 21, 2011 8:35:57 GMT -8
Um..if these are LD entries, they need to have LD in the subject heading. But it's well-written. I like it
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gear
Sixth Year
"What fun is it being cool if you can't wear a sombrero?" ~Calvin and Hobbes
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Post by gear on Oct 21, 2011 14:55:54 GMT -8
Very good fic!
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Post by phoenix on Oct 21, 2011 20:02:19 GMT -8
I like it too. You can sense Lily isn't thrilled to be spending time with James. Hahaha, i like it!
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Crystal
Sixth Year
♥ Proud Gryffindor ♥
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Post by Crystal on Oct 29, 2011 15:09:22 GMT -8
Very cute! I love the idea of her being trapped with them over the holidays (and her begging for an excape!)
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Post by Fate on Oct 31, 2011 2:02:19 GMT -8
Hehehehe! Lily trapped with the Marauders all Christmas break would make for a hilarious fic!
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Post by jazzyjess on Oct 31, 2011 20:30:13 GMT -8
Oh, poor Lily! Hee hee <3
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