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Post by willowstorm9 on Oct 20, 2011 22:49:05 GMT -8
Title: Tension… Rating: PG – PG-13 Summary: The unrequited love of a Hufflepuff Word count: 219
Diary,
Cho Chang broke up with Harry Potter. –insert little dance here- She wasn’t worth him anyways mainly because it was her fault. Not that I’m blaming anyone… Ok I really am but she was super nice to me whenever her and Cedric would stroll around the school together and I would randomly pop up and ask Cedric questions like there was no tomorrow. Now that I think about it, that was a bad idea. Gah I was stupid. Meh. She was just a dumb Ravenclaw. No Gryffindor deserves Ravenclaw. They deserve a sturdy Hufflepuff who will fight beside them and be forever theirsl not someone who will throw riddles and over think everything. They make no sense. Side tangent. Cho is still in love with Cedric. She still cries in the bathroom like the big baby she is. Harry doesn’t need someone who’s going to mope around all day and cry over spilt milk, though crying over Cedric is acceptable. No. He needs someone amazing, someone who will be loyal until the end. He needs a Hufflepuff. He needs me. I wouldn’t do anything to make me hate him. He’s just so hot and sexy. I want to just… All night long!!! Oh heck yeah! <3 Mrs. Potter <3 P.S. That red head has nothing on my looks.
Operation Poufsouffle
Awarded 10 Points, by Jess, on November 2, 2011.
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Crystal
Sixth Year
♥ Proud Gryffindor ♥
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Post by Crystal on Oct 29, 2011 18:10:19 GMT -8
Ohmygosh. The last few lines were epic. And you've pretty much summed up why I have a strong dislike for Cho. Awarded 5 Points, by Jess, on November 2, 2011. **review points cutoff
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Post by jazzyjess on Nov 2, 2011 17:05:33 GMT -8
Me too, Crystal! Cho was lame. I like how you explored her relationship with Harry (and her relationship with Cedric) through an outside character.
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