Crystal
Sixth Year
♥ Proud Gryffindor ♥
Posts: 617
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Post by Crystal on Oct 21, 2011 13:00:31 GMT -8
Title: Tom’s Diary Rating: PG Word count: 161 Warnings: mentions bullying. Summary: Young Tom Riddle writes in his little black diary.
Dear Diary,
I caught the ball today! It wasn’t directed to me, but I caught it anyway. Ralph hit me because of it, but it came right at me. Was I supposed to just let it hit my face? It doesn’t matter anyway. It’s the first time I got to touch the ball here, and even though he broke my nose, it was still nice.
I really hate it here! Just because I’m smaller than the other boys, I never get picked to play. And why should they get to take my food? Just because I can’t fight them, they get to do whatever they want.
I wish I could do whatever I want. I think I know why people do bad things. It’s so very difficult to keep thinking people are good, when they never seem to act that way.
I have to go now, I hear someone coming. I don’t want them to take you away from me.
Tom
Edit: Awarded 10 points by Fate, Feb 14th 2012.
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gear
Sixth Year
"What fun is it being cool if you can't wear a sombrero?" ~Calvin and Hobbes
Posts: 568
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Post by gear on Oct 21, 2011 15:01:44 GMT -8
... I'm not sure how, but you've managed to make me feel bad for Voldemort.
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Bec
Ministry Employee
Procrastination -------------# (it's a wand)
Posts: 1,098
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Post by Bec on Oct 21, 2011 17:51:01 GMT -8
Don't you worry Tom one day you'll pretty much do as you like.
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Post by beans on Oct 21, 2011 18:40:58 GMT -8
I hate Voldie, I like Tom.... does that make sense? I only like Tom because of this entry it touched my heart strings. *sniffle*
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Post by phoenix on Oct 21, 2011 19:30:38 GMT -8
This is deep Crystal. A true young Tom Riddle. Very good!
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Post by Elienp on Oct 23, 2011 3:27:34 GMT -8
I don't like him but I admit he had a tough time
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Post by Kaitee on Oct 23, 2011 13:27:29 GMT -8
Poor kid! You made me feel sorry for him, I didn't think that was ever possible. fantastic job!
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Post by maraudersrule97 on Oct 23, 2011 17:13:49 GMT -8
You made him sound so young and innocent; it makes it hard to hate him! Great job.
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Post by Fate on Oct 24, 2011 23:01:13 GMT -8
Little Tom Riddle! I agree with everyone above, you make me feel sympathy for him! Now I'm wondering if things could have gone differently had Tom been a happy and loved child...
Edit: All above reviews have been awarded 5 points by Fate, Feb 14th 2012.
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