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Post by jazzyjess on Nov 5, 2011 14:00:46 GMT -8
Title: That Moment Rating: G Word Count: 100 Warnings: Summary: Hermione attends a Quidditch game.
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The crowd is whistling, hollering. You feel a gasp catch in your throat as his broomstick plummets towards the earth. There’s a commotion to the left - a Gryffindor Chaser has been struck out of the air by a Bludger – and it diverts the crowd’s attention, but you can’t tear your eyes away from the Seeker diving toward the unmistakeable glint of the Snitch’s wings.
At the last second, he pulls up, toes of his green and silver boots skimming the dirt at the bottom of the pitch, and you start to breathe again.
The Snitch is in his hand.
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Post by Rachael on Nov 5, 2011 14:07:05 GMT -8
Well done. This is well written.
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Post by Kaitee on Nov 5, 2011 19:14:43 GMT -8
Your description of this tense moment in the game is amazing! Awesome job!
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Post by jazzyjess on Nov 5, 2011 23:06:58 GMT -8
Thanks, woody and Kaitlyn
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Post by Elienp on Nov 5, 2011 23:43:58 GMT -8
I love it! Great job !
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Post by jazzyjess on Dec 2, 2011 23:14:28 GMT -8
Thanks, Elie!! <3
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