tonks1998
First Year
lov hp!!!!!!!!!!
Posts: 19
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Post by tonks1998 on Oct 21, 2011 23:41:07 GMT -8
Title: When Scorpious got sorted into Gryffindor Rating: G Word Count: 113 Warnings: None Summary: Scorpious writes home.
Dear Mum...and Dad,
I didn’t think that this would happen like this. You know what I mean, right? No, I take that as a no...
Well, I have been sorted into Grifinddor Gryfffndoir Gryffindor. Where the Lion roars. Where at a Quidditch match against Slytherin it eats up the snake like crunch and munch, (you know the sound).
But we must always look on the bright side. I made a friend! Her name is Rose Weasley. No, no something like that, don’t get angryness Mum! I won't talk to her about Potter!
Love and fear, Scorpious
P.S. Please tell Dad not to send me to Dumstrang. I love Hogwarts.
[Edit: I just edited for spelling/grammar. Great job!]
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Bec
Ministry Employee
Procrastination -------------# (it's a wand)
Posts: 1,098
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Post by Bec on Oct 21, 2011 23:44:45 GMT -8
Naw, it's so cute how scared Scorpius is of his parents. Great fic!
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Post by Elienp on Oct 22, 2011 0:36:13 GMT -8
Poor Scorpius,torn between his parents and his own life, good job!
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Post by phoenix on Oct 22, 2011 5:19:05 GMT -8
Nicely done!
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Post by maraudersrule97 on Oct 22, 2011 14:09:20 GMT -8
Scorpious is so adorable! Great writing!
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Crystal
Sixth Year
♥ Proud Gryffindor ♥
Posts: 617
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Post by Crystal on Oct 22, 2011 14:57:07 GMT -8
He is so sweet! I love how unlike his father he is. Nice independent young boy.
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Post by Fate on Nov 1, 2011 0:09:56 GMT -8
I said it when I edited but again- great job!
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