Rys~
First Year
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Post by Rys~ on Jul 14, 2010 15:45:32 GMT -8
Title: Not So Secret Secrets Rating: PG Warnings: Dialogue only. Pairings: None. Summary: Sirius runs away from home. Written for a contest on another site and you could only use dialogue, which is why it's all in dialouge.
"Come back this instant!"
"Why, so you can yell at me some more? We pretend we're the perfect family, but that's not true is it?"
"If you hadn't disgraced the family name-"
"Because I'm in Gryffindor? That's all that matters to you, a stupid title?"
"Because you insist on associating yourself with traitors and mudbloods. Couldn't you find some suitable friends?"
"My friends are perfectly fine. And they have nothing to do with this. It's not about them, it's about this horrible excuse for a family. Aren't parents supposed to support their children?"
"We would support you if you joined our side, Sirius. It isn't our fault you won't listen to reason."
"You call that reason? Shunning people just because they don't fit your description of a perfect person?"
"Oh, let me guess, you're going to say that they're no different from us? That we should just accept them and bring peace to the world?"
"No, that would be a compliment. They're better than you could ever hope to be."
"Better? You fool! They could never be better than us. We are the best of the Wizarding World. We are-"
"Oh, shut up Mother."
"Sirius Black, come back here! You are not-"
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Post by Zoe on Jul 14, 2010 18:28:35 GMT -8
I actually really liked that it was all dialogue, it made it very interesting to read. Now that I think about it I don't think I've ever read a fic that had the conversation between Sirius and his Mom before he ran away, I really enjoyed it
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Rys~
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Post by Rys~ on Jul 14, 2010 18:30:11 GMT -8
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it . And I'm glad it didn't seem too unoriginal .
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rowena
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Post by rowena on Jul 21, 2010 5:00:28 GMT -8
I loved the ending! It was very enjoyable to read, the all-dialouge made the pace good and you could picture his movements. Also, I like the idea...Mrs. Black sounds much the same as her portrait
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Rys~
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Post by Rys~ on Jul 21, 2010 13:46:09 GMT -8
I'm glad you liked it ^.^. I was suprised I would get good reviews on this one since it's all dialogue, but thanks .
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