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Post by rachy on Oct 22, 2011 21:34:20 GMT -8
Title: When Sorry Is All You Can Say Rating: PG Word Count: 162 words. Summary: Sirius writes his last letter in the desperation between innocent and guilty.
Remus –
I’m sorry. Merlin, I’m so sorry. Gods, they’re dead. Merlin, Harry’s gone, but he’s safe. And Moony they’re gone and we thought it was you. You were the logical choice the smart choice and Merlin be damned the obvious choice. Gods, I’m sorry. I should have, I should have trusted you. And Merlin I should have just done it. I didn’t do it Remus but I should have, it wasn’t me but oh what a fool I was. They’re gone and I can’t go to you, I can’t because you thought it was me as surely as I thought it was you and they’re gone, Remus, and they’re not coming back and it’s his fault and my fault and you know what I have to do and I’m sorry. I wish you were with me, and James and Lily, oh Merlin please but I have to go. The filthy traitor can’t get away with this, Moony, and they’re gone and
- Padfoot.
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Post by Elienp on Oct 23, 2011 1:58:03 GMT -8
Heart-breaking, really, I can feel his pain.
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Post by maraudersrule97 on Oct 24, 2011 23:34:14 GMT -8
This is very sad. Sirius' pain really shows in this one. Great job!
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Bec
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Post by Bec on Oct 25, 2011 0:57:18 GMT -8
My god I almost cried So heartbreaking. Poor Sirius.
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Rose
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Post by Rose on Oct 25, 2011 7:13:46 GMT -8
So sad....feel so bad for Sirius! great work!
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Slone
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Post by Slone on Oct 25, 2011 9:59:51 GMT -8
So sad poor Sirius!
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Crystal
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Post by Crystal on Oct 29, 2011 16:49:46 GMT -8
This really makes me feel for him. Of course he would feel responsible that he wasn't the secret keeper and that he suspected Remus for being the spy. I think both Sirius and Remus feel partially responsible for the Potters' deaths, and I think you captured Sirius's perspective perfectly.
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Post by rachy on Oct 30, 2011 19:24:04 GMT -8
I really think that Sirius wouldn't have been in a good place at all. Not only did one of his friends that he trusted and didn't even expect to betray him betray him, when Sirius had vouched for him, but he killed the only real family Sirius had. Sirius then only has one friend left, who he's isolated from because he thought he was a traitor, his godson's been taken away from him and he's taken it upon himself to keep his loyalty to James and is going to kill someone who was one of his best friends for the past 10 years. It's heartbreaking. He is just full of so much angsty potential, but it's just so angsty and gut-wrenching and yeah. Thankyou
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Post by jazzyjess on Oct 31, 2011 22:57:00 GMT -8
Oh, so so so sad. Great, wonderful, excellent job here.
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Post by Fate on Nov 1, 2011 2:25:51 GMT -8
This has so many emotions in it! AMAZING job!
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