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Post by Elienp on Oct 21, 2011 12:47:13 GMT -8
Title: Traitor Rating: PG Words: 234 Warning: none Summary: Hermione's becoming a traitor and even though she knows it, she can't help it.
I do not feel like a traitor, yet it's what I am. My feelings are making me betray them, them, my best friends, my family, I can't believe I'm betraying them because of... because of what? Love? Is it that? Do I really love him?
I do have feelings for him, but is that enough to say I'm in love?
What does love mean? How can it be defined? Who can explain it? I have read so many books, but none has brought me valuable knowledge about it... I don't like that. I don't like not to know. I don't like to be lost.
Love is a field I have no means to explore beforehand, if I want to understand it I have to do it by myself.
I wouldn't have thought it'd be so scary. It's scary to think about blindly walking into it, even more to think he might not be there to welcome me.
Will he be there for me or... or am I deceiving myself?
Is his... his affection for me real?
Once again, I do not know...
I am a Gryffindor who has feelings for a Slytherin.
I am a bookworm who is hating books.
I am a know-it-all who doesn't know anything useful.
What should have never happened is surprisingly – and unfortunately – happening.
Right now I fear I might be falling in love with Draco Malfoy.
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Post by phoenix on Oct 22, 2011 14:16:36 GMT -8
Hermione would make a great evil character I think and you write it good here. Good job!
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Post by Elienp on Oct 23, 2011 0:42:34 GMT -8
Thank you
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Post by maraudersrule97 on Oct 26, 2011 15:29:46 GMT -8
If Draco and Hermione got together in the books, I could totally see Hermione getting like this. You portrayed her perfectly. Great job!
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Crystal
Sixth Year
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Post by Crystal on Oct 27, 2011 14:44:51 GMT -8
Excellent portrayal of this pairing; I think that this is probably how she would really feel if they were canon. Great fic!
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Post by Elienp on Oct 28, 2011 0:39:20 GMT -8
Thank you
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Post by jazzyjess on Oct 31, 2011 22:24:59 GMT -8
Oh, Malfoy! Love what you've done with Hermione's thought process here!
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Post by Fate on Nov 1, 2011 2:00:00 GMT -8
Scandalous.... and awesome!
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Post by Elienp on Nov 1, 2011 2:28:40 GMT -8
Thank you =]
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