Bec
Ministry Employee
Procrastination -------------# (it's a wand)
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Post by Bec on Oct 21, 2011 16:51:03 GMT -8
Title: More than you can imagine Rating: PG Word Count: 109 Summary: Cho moping. ........................................................
Diary,
I miss him. I miss him everyday.
I miss his smiles, the warm summer afternoons where he would hold me and nothing could hurt me, or him. I hate how I will never be able to tease his cute dimples and even more so I hate myself for the way I feel about Harry.
But most of all I hate Voldemort. He was the one who had taken him away from her.
-CC
Cho closed her diary and sighed. What use was it to write in this stupid book? Professor McGonagall had told her that a journal could ease the pain. Well it didn’t, it made it worse.
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Post by phoenix on Oct 21, 2011 19:42:45 GMT -8
Love how you start with sadness and end with anger. Well written and I could see Cho writing something like this!
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Post by maraudersrule97 on Oct 26, 2011 15:26:48 GMT -8
This is beautiful! It's really sad, but I like it a lot. Great job.
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Crystal
Sixth Year
♥ Proud Gryffindor ♥
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Post by Crystal on Oct 27, 2011 14:11:56 GMT -8
So sad. I love how you show the different emotions that would be running through her after Cedric's death.
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Post by jazzyjess on Oct 31, 2011 22:14:55 GMT -8
I hate ho-Cho, but this is a sad touch on her real-person side.
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Post by Fate on Nov 1, 2011 2:15:17 GMT -8
Poor Cho! I'm so happy to see some Cho-love after all the Cho-bashing in the Book Club! I really thought her emotions were legit in OotP! <3
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