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Post by jazzyjess on Oct 12, 2011 21:15:39 GMT -8
Title: The Trouble With Tutoring (ii) Rating: PG Warnings: None. But there won't always be a letter. And there certainly won't always be a diary. Summary: Draco is being tutored. His life is falling apart. Everything is a party.
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Granger –
I have no desire to go spreading the knowledge that I am no longer clever enough to best you in every class without assistance. Tell Scarface and Idiot that you’ve started a knitting club for that H.U.R.L. group or whatever you keep promoting. Your little lapdogs will buy it in a heartbeat.
– DM
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Here begins a record detailing events having occurred since June 20, 1995.
Journal,
It grates that I must conceal these feelings. Hatred, yes, but beyond that, there is terror. The air around my head, around my home, is thick. Every breath I take feels heavy. I feel that I am being suffocated from the inside.
Mother says there is no way for us to buy Father’s way out of Azkaban. She advises me not to approach Him and plead Father’s cause. She says that we are better off accepting that circumstances beyond our control are what have put him behind bars. She says that He will not risk His new empire for our family.
He has sent for me.
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Edit: 10 Points Awarded by Fate, 12/10/11
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Bec
Ministry Employee
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Post by Bec on Oct 12, 2011 21:22:07 GMT -8
This is the perfect reply to Hermione's note!!!! Sounds so much like Draco!!! so much love. And the addition of the diary exert is a lovely touch
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Post by Rachael on Oct 12, 2011 22:06:30 GMT -8
This was wonderful. Well done!
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ihavenoidea8
Fourth Year
"Don't worry. You're just as sane as I am."
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Post by ihavenoidea8 on Oct 13, 2011 1:15:25 GMT -8
Haha, I loved the reply! I will write the response and post it tomorrow, if all technology agrees with me.
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Post by Zoe on Oct 13, 2011 1:32:57 GMT -8
This was amazing Jess! So well written, and the note sounds exactly like Draco and it made me laugh out loud, loudly. Seriously, my dog was concerned for my mental well being I am sure.
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Post by Elienp on Oct 13, 2011 3:07:22 GMT -8
It really sounds like Draco! Well done!
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Post by maraudersrule97 on Oct 13, 2011 8:26:50 GMT -8
Hahaha. Oh my goodness, this is funny! And I love the little journal entry at the end!
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Post by Kaitee on Oct 13, 2011 12:59:57 GMT -8
This sounds exactly like Draco with the insults and the diary entry part talking about 'he has sent for me' I got chills at that line. Great job!!! I loved the part about knitting for H.U.R.L. hahahahaha
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gear
Sixth Year
"What fun is it being cool if you can't wear a sombrero?" ~Calvin and Hobbes
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Post by gear on Oct 13, 2011 14:02:33 GMT -8
This made me grin at the perfect *Draco-ness*, laugh at H.U.R.L, and fear for his future.
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Post by jazzyjess on Oct 16, 2011 20:50:46 GMT -8
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Crystal
Sixth Year
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Post by Crystal on Oct 27, 2011 16:00:18 GMT -8
hahaha!! This was the perfect response. "H.U.R.L" is *priceless* and the humor is wonderfully negated by the somber journal entry.
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