Crystal
Sixth Year
♥ Proud Gryffindor ♥
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Post by Crystal on Oct 11, 2011 6:39:12 GMT -8
This was so sad! Fred's death always makes me cry, but usually because I think of poor George. Excellent job at capturing Ron! I think you've explored his character perfectly.
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Post by rachy on Oct 26, 2011 20:53:51 GMT -8
This was beautiful. You have Ron's insecurity and self-doubt down to a T, and the idea of Ron thinking that Fred didn't care was quite a bittersweet point.
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