Crystal
Sixth Year
♥ Proud Gryffindor ♥
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Post by Crystal on Oct 22, 2011 14:35:42 GMT -8
Title: Leverage Rating: PG Word count: 137 Warnings: none. Summary: Peter Pettigrew writes in his journal, just before turning the Potters in.
Dear journal,
The time has finally come. I knew it would; it was only a matter of time before he reached me. He’s everywhere. To finally have the time come, it’s a bit of a relief, really. Fortunate timing as well. The Potters have entrusted me as their secret keeper. I really wish it hadn’t come to that. I’ll have no choice now. He’ll give me no choice. But at least I’ll have information to offer him. It will count for something. It has to!
Nothing is safe, especially in writing. Even thoughts are unsafe these days. But it doesn’t matter, because I will tell him everything. Surely if I deliver the Potters, he will appreciate my loyalty. If I don’t fight him, surely he will show mercy. He will see that I can be loyal.
Wormtail
Edit: Awarded 10 points by Fate, on Feb 5th 2012.
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Post by phoenix on Oct 22, 2011 14:53:36 GMT -8
You've written it well. You make it seem like we should almost feel bad for Peter. Excellent job!
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gear
Sixth Year
"What fun is it being cool if you can't wear a sombrero?" ~Calvin and Hobbes
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Post by gear on Oct 22, 2011 16:10:00 GMT -8
You have Peter's self preservation and fear down perfectly.
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Post by maraudersrule97 on Oct 22, 2011 16:23:41 GMT -8
This sounds exactly like Peter. You've captured him well. Great writing!
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Post by Fate on Oct 24, 2011 20:28:47 GMT -8
PETER YOU ARE SUCH AN A-HOLE! Great job Crystal, I love having an in depth look in to Wormtail's mind!
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