Crystal
Sixth Year
♥ Proud Gryffindor ♥
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Post by Crystal on Oct 21, 2011 13:03:11 GMT -8
Title: Gone Rating: G Word count: 182 Warnings: none Summary: Hermione holds a grudge. Or she tries to, anyway.
Dear Ron,
I’ve been thinking and pacing and crying and I don’t know what else to do. It’s not as though I can talk to you. I may never talk to you again. Did you think about that? When you disapparated? Did you even pause to consider for a single second that you might never see me again? Or were you too preoccupied with your less-than-stuffed stomach and cold feet?
It’s not as if you are the only one who had to give everything up. But you are the only one who had something to go back to, I suppose.
I wonder if anything will ever be normal again. It seems that now, the best we can hope for is to make it through this alive. I never thought I’d miss you trying to talk with an obnoxious amount of food in your mouth. As unattractive as it is.
Obviously I can’t send this to you. But maybe somehow you’ll come back to what is left of your senses, and you’ll know that I’m thinking about you.
I do miss you.
Hermione
Edit: 10 Points Awarded by Jess, 11/17/11.
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Post by Rachael on Oct 21, 2011 13:10:21 GMT -8
She's better off without that tosser! You don't need him, 'mione! Find yourself a real man! Excellent fic! Well done! Edit: 5 Points Awarded by Jess, 11/17/11.
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gear
Sixth Year
"What fun is it being cool if you can't wear a sombrero?" ~Calvin and Hobbes
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Post by gear on Oct 21, 2011 14:53:34 GMT -8
Great fic!
Edit: 5 Points Awarded by Jess, 11/17/11.
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Post by phoenix on Oct 21, 2011 20:08:09 GMT -8
You can clearly tell she likes him. Good job Crystal!!!!!
Edit: 5 Points Awarded by Jess, 11/17/11.
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Post by Elienp on Oct 21, 2011 22:32:44 GMT -8
Great job ! I love the sentence about his "less-than stuffed stomach and cold feet" Edit: 5 Points Awarded by Jess, 11/17/11.
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Bec
Ministry Employee
Procrastination -------------# (it's a wand)
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Post by Bec on Oct 22, 2011 1:31:16 GMT -8
Excellent fic! Sounds alot like Hermione and Ron!
Edit: 5 Points Awarded by Jess, 11/17/11.
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Post by maraudersrule97 on Oct 22, 2011 14:28:16 GMT -8
I love Ron and Hermione together! Great writing!
Edit: 5 Points Awarded by Jess, 11/17/11.
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Post by Fate on Oct 24, 2011 20:44:39 GMT -8
You write Hermione so well! I find her so hard to write!
Edit: 5 Points Awarded by Jess, 11/17/11. **review points cutoff
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Post by jazzyjess on Nov 17, 2011 22:06:34 GMT -8
What a lovely job you've done! You've captured Hermione quite well, her nagging, sympathy, and matter-of-factness.
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