Crystal
Sixth Year
♥ Proud Gryffindor ♥
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Post by Crystal on Oct 22, 2011 14:41:07 GMT -8
Title: Attempt to Woo (II) Rating: PG-13 Word count: 168 Warnings: Really bad cheesy romance (but it’s supposed to be that way) and romantic implications. Summary: James tries to win Lily by flattery. A/N: Each fic is stand-alone, but I think you get the full effect when they're read in sequence. So please read Attempt to Woo (I) first! My beautiful Lily flower, Your eyes are the very same green as the ground you walk on, which I worship at your feet. Your skin is as fair as the clearest summer night, with the stars in the sky being a blanket above us and the crickets chirping our song of love. Your gift in charms is surely the root cause of the spell you have cast over me, for I can think of nothing else and see myself with nobody else for the rest of my days on this earth. Should we not be together, the rest of my days will be limited, or indeed I would wish it so, as each day will become more dreary than the last. Let me take you my lovely flower, and nurture you and care for you so that you may blossom into the full potential that I see within you, and that we may pass along those traits to our future offspring. Those dearest to me call me Prongs. Edit: Awarded 10 points by Fate, on Feb 5th 2012.
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Post by maraudersrule97 on Oct 22, 2011 16:29:41 GMT -8
Oh my goodness! This is hilarious! "Those dearest to me call me Prongs." - I laughed so hard after this. Great writing Crystal!
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Post by Elienp on Oct 23, 2011 2:55:06 GMT -8
Why did he have to go so far ? xD
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Post by Fate on Oct 24, 2011 20:10:12 GMT -8
This is hilarious! He's soooo corny! He's tried two tactics, what will be next?!
Edit: All above reviews have been awarded 5 points by Fate, Feb 5th 2012.
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