Crystal
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Post by Crystal on Aug 19, 2011 11:27:35 GMT -8
Title: Departure Series: Falling of the Founders (FotF) – part III Rating: PG House: Slytherin Word Count: 112 Summary: Salazar leaves Hogwarts
"And ever since the founders four Were whittled down to three Have the Houses been united And they once were meant to be." -Sorting hat, OotP
Salazar picked up his luggage and took one last look around the chamber. The bare walls stared back at him; the empty wooden shelves protruded from the cold stone. It felt as if they were reaching out to punch him in the stomach.
He was doing the right thing. It was necessary.
Rowena had monopolized the academics.
Godric had issued his ultimatum.
And Helga… well she was the worst of them all. Her admission standards had become non-existent.
Yes, there was no place for him anymore. There were people who would appreciate his brilliance. And he wouldn’t really be leaving Hogwarts.
His legacy would outlive them all in the Chamber of Secrets.
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Bec
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Post by Bec on Aug 20, 2011 18:43:57 GMT -8
This almost makes you feel sorry for Slytherin. The patheticness of him standing in a place that no longer welcomes him is brilliant. Once again, good work!
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Crystal
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Post by Crystal on Aug 22, 2011 8:54:16 GMT -8
I was going for him being unwelcomed and feeling a little outcasted, so I'm glad that came through! Thank you!
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Post by Zoe on Aug 23, 2011 0:03:49 GMT -8
I agree 100% with Bec! You wrote this wonderfully, and you can just feel the hostility and unwelcomeness
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Crystal
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Post by Crystal on Aug 23, 2011 3:40:00 GMT -8
Thank you!!
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Post by jazzyjess on Aug 26, 2011 0:14:00 GMT -8
I can't say anything else that hasn't been touched upon by the others. How it must feel to be slowly edged out - I pity him Nice job, Crystal!
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Crystal
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Post by Crystal on Aug 26, 2011 4:39:46 GMT -8
Thank you Jess! Pity is exactly what I was going for.
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