Lilac
Seventh Year
Operation Poufsoufle
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Post by Lilac on Sept 2, 2011 19:12:16 GMT -8
Prompt Number : #5 "Peas in a Pod" Title: Redheads Ratings: G Summary: The Weasley family were really peas in a pod.
McGonagall looked over to the Gryffindor table to see a bunch of redheads sitting on the far side of the hall. The oldest was talking politely to Miss Clearwater with a sense of dignity that would have befitted someone thrice his age. The twins were laughing, their faces lighting up the room. They always brought light into the darkest places; even Umbridge’s classroom seemed more relaxed when the twins were around. The second youngest was grinning at something Ms Granger had said to him while stuffing his mouth with food. McGonagall just managed to avoid smirking when she saw Granger’s look of disgust as food splattered over her. The youngest redhead was watching Mr Potter with awe, talking quickly about the Gryffindor quidditch team. The Weasley family may seem odd to some people, but the professor knew that they fit together perfectly. They really were peas in a pod.
Edit: Awarded 7 Points, by Zoe, On 09/06/11.
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Post by Elienp on Sept 2, 2011 23:45:45 GMT -8
I like how you make the Weasley Family so, I don't have a word to say it clearly, so well-fit I'd say, so united Edit: Awarded 4 Points, by Zoe, On 09/06/11.
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Post by Zoe on Sept 2, 2011 23:47:11 GMT -8
You gotta love those Wealseys! Great fic Edit: Awarded 4 Points, by Zoe, On 09/06/11.
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gear
Sixth Year
"What fun is it being cool if you can't wear a sombrero?" ~Calvin and Hobbes
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Post by gear on Sept 5, 2011 12:00:30 GMT -8
This is a wonderful glimpse at the Weasleys.
Edit: Awarded 4 Points, by Zoe, On 09/06/11.
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Post by Kaitee on Sept 7, 2011 6:35:08 GMT -8
I like the line 'they fit together perfectly' just because it's so true. Each Weasley is so different from the other and yet together they are so perfect. Good job.
Edit: Awarded 4 Points by Lilac, on 8/9/11.
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